Monday, March 28, 2016

PLT Fangirl Reaction Post + Double Chapters !

As I said in my last GIF post, I'm glad I have Lile's PLT and QC (and her mysterious novella) as a treat from writing. I thought I'd do a little PLT gif post !



Me every time Lile's posts a new chapter



Erik and I reading the creepy parts together




Sometimes I look at Clara like




 Then Sometimes I'm Like



Mr. Fierro is basically like


But Mr. Fierro and Rose have me all

Recap
The plan goes...very wrong. When Sage is tortured and killed for helping a spy Alan makes an even bigger mistake and kills Dr. Markov. Now he has M44 and he's going to get some answers from the Rektor.

Three months ago a baby was stolen from Mojave by some of your people. Where is he ?,” I demand.

“We don’t know--,” Ilena starts.

“You shut up,” Bishop growls at her. ”No more games... There was a baby brought here once.  But it went straight to Mother,”

“What did she do with him ?,” I ask.

“We don’t know,” Bishop says. “We never saw it again.”

I raise the gun at him again.

“Take me to the Rektor,” I say. “ Now.”

“I can’t give you an audience with the Rektor on short notice--,”

“I don’t want an audience,” I tell him. “I want to question her.  Alone.”

Chapter 32
Playlist
-1- Fly by Ludovico Einaudi
-2- If I Lose Myself One Republic, Alesso
-3- Nighttime by the XX
-4- Divenire by Ludovico Einaudi

Chapter 33 
-1- On the Shore by Slow skies

Tuesday, March 22, 2016

Org Chart Fun !





Who has a serial she needs to write but spent way to much time creating fictional organizational charts ?






Republic Liberation Army Org Chart
 I only did it up to how the organization relates to the characters and to the RLA police force. In my head there are a few more undersecretaries. And obviously soldiers who are drafted are at the bottom.


Camp Harmony Organizational Chart (with ages)
Yes, yes I will be doing more of these in the future.

Compulsion 31 
Previously...
Alan is invited to the Rektor's Board meeting and he discovers it's literally a board...a chess board!  Alan runs to the safe house and they come up with a plan to work with the Nico Santoro's Cavolcotti Riders--who also have a grudge with the Mjollner --to attack the Rektor's Board and get the Rektor alone to question her.

To give them a better advantage Alan plans to pay off some of the Mjollner's street samauri to switch sides. It's a good thing he saw a familiar face at the Board meeting:

“Remember me?,” Belle asked.
“Yeah,” I say confidently, but I’m panicking. She could blow my cover. “You tried to kill me.”
“I was just following orders,” she sighed. “You know how it is. “
“Maybe,” I admit.
“You switched teams, huh ?,” she said.
“It’s complicated.” I tell her and she nods.
“I get it,” she tells me and splays out her fingernails. “I just go where the pay is good,”
.....

-1-Good Girl by Lykke Li
-2-Way Too Fast by Active Child

Sunday, March 20, 2016

UL3 Writing Update



Today I'm doing a GIF post on the struggle of being in the trenches of writing UL3


 

UL is so nostalgic to me.  I honestly think I could just write UL3 for me and never post it.



When I tell you I'm bowing out of the snippet war with Lile
( I just don't want to share too much without context.... )



When I read all the pantsing no-end-in-sight craziness of the original UL for research

 

When I tell Erik I'm at the "coffee shop" writing UL

 

When I hit writer's block with UL3



When I write for more than 20 minutes straight


When I use the unposted sections from OHG for UL3 and get to write less

 
 

Me when I post my first UL3 Chapter

 
 
Anyway, it's a good thing I have  PLT and Q&C to bother Lile about !
 


Okay, back to the trenches


Okay, one more snippet: 

“See?,” He says. “She’s so paranoid.”
I wasn’t paranoid.

Compulsion 30

Previously
Isla Haley has been selling Harlow's stolen items for money at a flea market.  Meanwhile at camp Harmony Corp. Strange  and Corp. St. John  are trying to get Haley to help them remove  Sgt. Maxwell from his post.

But Haley is on thin ice with Maxwell. He is being blackmailed into sleeping with Maxwell because Haley confessed he may have helped Harlow kill their brother-in-law. Oh and apparently Maxwell is into power play and auto erotic asphyxiation

Also this scene:

"Headquarters is asking that we offload 30% of our inmate population," Corp. St. John said. "They’ve sent a list of who they recommend. I’ve already asked Halloran to begin arranging the transport--,”

“I got the message,” Maxwell says. “I’ll take it from here.”

“Yes, sir.” St. John said with a nod. “And sir--,”

“What ?,”

“Um..Nothing, sir.”

“What corporal ? ,”

“I was just going to ask you, sir…..Why are they doing this, sir ? Did we do something ?,”

Maxwell had no fucking clue, but in lieu of answering he turns his back on St. John and slams his office door. St. John couldn’t be too far from the truth.

 He had either done something very good. Or something very bad.

-1- Eastern Glow
-2-  The Light
-3- Highway

Saturday, March 12, 2016

Peeks Out From Trenches

"...The only exception was the Hartford Maple Butter Sundae. It was made with local churned ice cream and a maple butter sauce made fresh by a friend of the owner.

- UL3 

 Lile and I started sharing bits of our WIPs in her last comment section, so I'm attempting see if I can get Q&C out of her line by line.

Lile, what's good  ?


 
Updates
I've been a little AWOL and it's because I have finished writing Compulsion !


Now I just need to edit it

Compulsion 29
Alan kills three men on motorcycles who are trying to kill Dr. Markov. Alan reports on it to the Rektor--who is a woman !  But while at the meeting Alan notices...something and he think he may know how to find Sara and Rayne's missing baby.
In other news, Rayne rewards Minnow's killing of Mjollner by making her a full member of the cartel.

Playlist
Chapter 29
-1- Leave Your Love by Sam Smith
-2- Anchor by Novo Amor
-3- Energy by Keri Hilson