I have decided to do two updates in a row. I really do want honest criticism for this chapter and I mean brutal but, I have to say this chapter is like my baby that I have been carrying for a long time and get to share with the world. I feel like I have to say I that but, I still want honesty.
I would love to find the perfect playlist for this chapter but, I am not the musical guru Linda is (I hear she has 27 new songs !). Anyway between looking at artist on my playlist, Linda's playlist and your suggestions I have put together a playlist for this chapter, for those of you who like to read along with one.
It is really an update/re-ordering of the one on the left so, it should be there already in order.
Now, this one is less conceptual but I have tried to put a new spin on some of the music.
For the next chapter (which I have yet to think about, yikes !) Joel said we would listen to the One Tree Hill CD's (not DVD's, I know) at lunch and I would find some new music and inspirtation.
I did try something a teensy bit new with the layout and style of the story to make the playlist easier to understand.
I have also taken some liberties with the style and format of the body of work on this chapter and I may continue to do it with other chapters. I feel like it helps me tell the story.
Now, You can listen to this playlist or you can do my personal suggestion and listen to Winter Song through the whole thing.
Okay, I am taking a deep breath because once I post this I will have nothing and I have to find time to get in the zone to start writing again but, here it is.
Elisa Part 1
- Ordinary by Saving Jane
Elisa Part 2
- One Girl Revolution-Superchick
-Better Day by Saving Jane
Juliana Part 1
- This Woman's Work by Maxwell
- Stand in the Rain- Superchick
-Gravity - Sara Barielles
Juliana Part 2
- Bella's Lullaby by Carter Burwell
- Winter Song- Sara Barielles
- Belief- Gavin Degraw ( This song has what I guess is a "club version" so there are two on the playlist)
This chapter was a lot of fun to read, It's nice that Julianna is starting to miss the small things, although Sawyers not looking to good in my book.
ReplyDeleteThis was defiantly a departure, very emotional as far as Julianna and Sawyer are concerned. Elisa is funny as usual.
ReplyDeleteHi, The music is great I think the story took an unexpected turn,can we assume the cutting of her hair as being symbolic ?
ReplyDeleteSawyer got a little hardcore in this chapter, although I doubt Julianna would have realized what the drugs were.
ReplyDeleteI would want to see Greg at the wedding too, I love Elisa it's cute that she wants to be a model.
ReplyDeletemeh, Julianna's getting a bit obsessive about Sawyer, it'll be interesting to see what happens next.
ReplyDeleteLove this chapter, Elisa is so Snarky. I can't believe they call that a town, LOL. Rosa seems pretty nice too.
ReplyDeleteSo, is Greg Tibetian ? I feel so sorry for Julie I can't belive Sawyer yelled at her and tackeled her, what does she see in him.
ReplyDeleteLooks like Sawyer was a little jealous of Sid. Great chapter can't see what Julianna does on her own.
ReplyDeleteI really like the playlist. I think the first version of Belief is the popular "stripped" version. The upbeat songs went well with Elisa's part, I think Julianna is close to the deep end.
ReplyDeleteI'm still holding on to my theroy, but I remember drug use being mentioned earlier with Sawyer, I think by Elisa, what a waste of a degree.
ReplyDeleteThier fight was so scary, I thought something bad was going to happen. It's like Sawyer is living a double life.
ReplyDeleteOuch, Sawyer's injuries sound tough. Is that green forth program real ?
ReplyDeleteI love how completely devoted Sawyer is to saving Elisa that he is willing to do anything. I hope they are reunited soon . . .
ReplyDeleteLove Elisa all her comments make me LOLIRL. Sawyer is kinda've of a jerk.
ReplyDeleteis the line “Are you in a lot of pain ?”
ReplyDelete“More than you know
from Star Wars ? Can't wait for an update
I couldn't help but to Squeee at so many updates (will this be happening alot) It really connects you to the story. I like Tabitha's Theory too, but maybe it's misdirection on your part. Sawyer is in a desperate place, isn't he.
ReplyDeleteHi, Midwest girl here, what does 'Georgia' mean ?
ReplyDeleteI'm guessing Sawyer is a democrat. When can we expect another stellar update ?
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ReplyDeleteMaylights -- I will admit, he came off far more likeable than I had planned.
Andrea H- Yes, it is. I tried to warn you guys 2 chapters ago.
Linda- No, not intentionally just a sign of another change in her.
Yolanda C- Yes, he did and I as I said it was unintentional on my part but my characters always do what they please.
Princess_Cinderella- Don't we all kind of want to be told that we are beautiful and take pictures for a living ?
Trinity- Again, unintentional but, I wanted her to miss what he said to her the first time around.
Rose- Yes, she has become snarly, I think it is a coping mecahnism.
Alexa- Yes, he is distantly I feel sorry for Juliana too. It wasn;t supposed to be a rough tackle though or anything violent.
Farrah- Well Sid does have Sawyer's office and Sawyer's job. Seeing Juliana on her own is something I want too.
CutieCate - "stripped" is that the word ? I like the non-stripped one.
Tabitha- I lightly hinted at it.
Darcy_Lover- that was the point
CranberriVodka- Love the user name ! No, that was the poetic license I took.
HeapsofLace- Love the username too ! I want them reuinted too, I really mean that but, I feel like they need the time alone to continue the story.
HannahBanana- I have no idea where they come from. Sawyer seems to be having a bad day on the comments.
Amber- No, it was a reference to him being arrested. I suppose the line should have been are you in trouble or something."
Mrs. Cullen- Yes, exactly Sawyer is desperate. I love that you all love the updates. I hope I am not spoiling you ! I like Tabitha's theory but, at this point it would physically never work out.
Corrainer- It's University of Georgia. Down south Football is a big deal.
Bluebelle- LoL, I have no clue. He was actually referring to the War on Drugs which gives harsher punishments for people who sell drugs.
I have no idea when there will be another update. I do feel jittery so I may bang a few words out.