Let's play a little game . . .
Of who, what, when, where and . . . why ? Also, I have decided to use more cuts in the blog posts. I can see how not using them makes the page load slower.
Who ?
So far, the only characters I have fully introduced are Rin and Seraphim. I have to say coming up with names was so hard for DT. I am trying not to have an Aerith an Bob issue.
Also, the names are not supposed to be biblical except for Gabriel and Seraphim. A Seraph is another word for an angel and a Seraphim is the plural. And yes, you could argue Corrine is a angel mentioned once somewhere but, her name was always just Rin before I made Rin a nickname.
Also, are you all happy we are back to female characters ? I know I haven't go to the beating the Belchdel Tes part but, I will. I like having female character but, it didn't start out that way . . .
What ?
I can't really get into the what of the story. However I promise I will never start anything with a death again. I have to admit I may use that as cheap and easy character motivation. I did it in Veritas to make Alan sympathetic and I did it in Sundays because that was where their story really starts. I'll get to why I did it in DT later.
When ?
From the very beginning I knew I wanted to write about angels. I got the characters and plot ready to go and when I began to write I realized I needed a setting. I needed a place to set this story. I thought on it and I came up with something kind of . . . different.
The story is set in a steampunk time--which basically means Victorian era. It will never come up in the story so I figure I may as well say. Now for a subcategory :
Steampunk w/ a twist
This isn't just steampunk, I wanted it to be a steampunk setting with a bit of lolita thrown in. I know what you are thinking when I say lolita and that is why I made a subcategory for this. Somewhere along the line of looking into the Victorian era/ Romanticism & Steampunk I came across the Gothic Lolita subculture and wrapped it into the story.
Basically, the dress of the characters is Lolita inspired, more specifically The Gothic Lolita. I can't explain it fully so, I'll steal from a lolita fashion website. Lolita is "a Japanese street fashion inspired primarily by the clothing and general aesthetics of the Rococo and Victorian periods."
While we are defining things, it has nothing to do with the book Lolita or underage girls--it was a victim of word borrowing. In fact Lolitas have strict modesty codes and aren't supposed to show their thighs or cleavage. Now, I don't entirely believe this statement on no sexual undertones because I can see how some of the outfits have a sexual/pedophiliac/anti-femenist undertone. Ecspeially with the "Sweet Lolita"
Anyhow, this was the dress that inspired Rin's funeral outfit :

I admit, I was amused looking at the all the pretty dresses so, you may see some more dress porn (lol, did I use that phrase right)
Where ?
There is going to be alot of psuedofancophile-ness in DT as well. I just really like French names and words so I use them.
Anyhow, the Palace de Tuileries is based on the palace of Versailles. There is a real Tuileries, if you are curious but, I have no idea what it looks like.
Why ?
I can't really get into the why of the story. I can't even say why I wrote it other than I wanted to write a PR. It's hard because there is so much I can say but,I haven't posted very much. All I ask for is honesty because I have no idea how the story is coming off.
Double Chapter Post :
Chapter 1
-1- Mad World by Adam Lambert ( i love a good cover and i love this song)
-2-Beloved by Yiruma
-3-Cristofori's Dream by David Lanz
Chapter 2
-1- May Angels Lead You In by Jimmey Eat World
-2-All Myself To You by Yiruma
-3-Take My Breath Away by Jessica Simpson ( i know, i know but, I love parts of this song though . . .))
Rin's brother has just died and she has buried him, but now her father tells her their is more to the story than she knew.
Oh, honey this just got very intersting. Was the term fairytale included in your mix of inspirations.
ReplyDeleteI can't help but to love the name Corrine but Rin is a nice name too.
ReplyDeleteSomething is SO inside that statue. Somehow i knew a double chapter post would be with a different POV.
ReplyDeleteI love the way Rin and her brother's relationship is portrayed. I could actually feel her desperation to avenge him.
ReplyDeleteIt is kind of like reading the Voltouri side of Breaking Dawn. Either way Rin seems like she is really kick-ass.
ReplyDeleteIs the "this Demon" referring to the Demon who is talking at the meeting ?
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ReplyDeleteOuch, that's got to be a hard name to have.
Call me crazy but parts of this remind me of the sense of adventure in Harry Potter so I'm really excited to see what comes next.
ReplyDeleteI don't know if I like the way Rin treats Seraphim I mean she treats her like a lost puppy or something.
ReplyDeleteI just- i just I can't imagine a HOT redhead. Cute and awkward maybe.
ReplyDelete^ Oh no you didn't
ReplyDelete"The whole story seemed so fantastical—a tyrant who was determined on taking over ? A person so devious they would kill another in cold blood"
ReplyDeleteI don't know Shawna that line seemed like a meta-disclaimer.
I love that this serial is filled with tropes I can't wait to pick them out !
ReplyDeleteWould it be considered a spoiler to know what year it is in the human world ?
ReplyDeleteI love the fact that humans aren't all puny and useless and that even being half-human is a threat, and what.
ReplyDeleteDoes the rest of Rin's family have wings ? Maybe she is half human too.
ReplyDeleteHow many years ago was the Sole Heir born ? The dad made it seem like it was just a few years ago.
ReplyDeleteDark is total up to something but for some reason I'm think the relationship (or lack of) between Seraphim and Gabriel is nice.
ReplyDeleteSo, Lolita's are like Japanese hipsters ?
ReplyDeleteSo when we first guessed it was about Angels you were trying to throw us off again ?
ReplyDeleteHm, I wouldn't say starting Veritas off with Mr. Kyto's death had as big of an impact as Haley's Brother in Sundays or Even Gabriel's death here.
ReplyDeleteHey, Isn't there a myth about a greek who falls in love with a statue. that's doesn't end well.
ReplyDeleteI was hoping she would at least take Seraphim with her.
ReplyDeleteI wonder if Demons are even allowed to like Angels. It doesn't seem likely.
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ReplyDeleteLinda-- No but, I guess it could have been. What is a fairytale really anyway ?
Maylights-- I like the name too but, whenever I hear it all I think of is the singer.
Tabby-- They won't happen to much after this.
Lorrie C- I really wanted it to be different from Jean&Minnie who had more of an quasi--unhealthy relationship
Biteme-- Now you have me thinking of how interesing a volturi side of Twilight would be. I mean, Edward and Bella don't even need to be in it. . . I guess I'm off to fanfiction.net . . .
Lilac_Love-- Yes. I knew that would get confusing but, I really didn't think their "informant" would willingly give his name.
LOTR-Mom - He is named after the artist melchior broederlam. Also, JSYK it is pronounced Mel-Core.
PeaceGoddess- I am very flattered to be compared to JK Rowling.
HappyApple-- Essentially, she is a lost puppy. Seraphim has no memories, no family and is a little bit naive to where she lives.
CaliforniaBlues-- This is probably why I have yet to find a picspirtation for Gabriel.
Tanya-- (:
Natalie-- Oh, it's not. I promise it's not . . .
Darcy_Lover-- I have grown to accept tropes as not a bad thing so pick away. Maybe I will get you started next post.
Princess- I feel like anything I say will be a spoiler. I will make a note of this comment.
Sugarcookie-- I agree.
Makemelala . . .
I would never have to see him.
ReplyDeleteFamous last words.
I would never have to see him.
ReplyDeleteFamous last words.
I wonder if Gabriel and Rin have the same mother ?
ReplyDeleteI wonder if Gabriel and Rin have the same mother ?
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ReplyDeletePetunia-- He was born a while ago so he is an adult. Also, in my head people in Eden age slower. I haven't fully sorted this out yet.
Sunset- I agree, Dark is up to something.
JennyP- I guess so.
CraberriV- Well, I hadn't made any definite decisions until about 2 months ago.
Carleigh - I agree,it really came out of nowehere in Veritas. I could have set it at a wedding or something. I just needed an opening scene.
CAgirl - Good eye ! There is and it is the myth of Pygmalion. It actually ends with the statue being brought to life for him. It was my inspiration however I imagine this situation will end differently . . . I don't know I haven't written it.
Redrose-- I never thought about that.
Trichelle- Good question.
ReplyDeleteCoraline-- Maybe
Ft. Life-- They do have the same mother but, they have a lot of step-siblings.
You mean stepsisters
ReplyDeleteYes. Actually, I meant to type halfsisters.
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