Ooops.
Well, I certaintly didn't intend to go into the comment section and encite mass excitement. I think I've talked about this before, but I do have UL ideas.I'm telling myself I won't write anything until HMLIS is done, I want to give this idea lots of time to sort of swim in my head. Right now I'm sort of juggling with writting a series of collected vignettes that will have a new plotline as well as retcon some of OHG. Not all of OHG, but some of it. If anything related to it comes up, I'm happy to talk about it, but don't expect anything until around April/May/June/July-ish.
CPShawna
It wasn't until after this did I realize CP Shawna could also stand for Cyberpunk Shawna ! This is especially funny to me because the file I keep all the Vice/Veritas stuff in is still call CP from when I didn't have a name for any of this. I have to say in this today's TDOSH, me and CPShawna get a little meta.
Rule of Cool
So, I had a lot of fun with this TDOSH and I may, may, MAY do one for Blessed Hearts. Only, I'd be making more fun of my consistent use of Rule of Cool. I also still have both verisons of the story up, so it would also be fun to see what changes I did make (because I surely don't remember)
It Gets Worse
So, chapter 1 is pretty tame in both content and commentary compared to what we have coming up. I hope you're ready, it only gets worse.
So SH and CPS one thing I can relate to is trying NOT edit when doing TDOLL. I moved everything to a word doc and edited it there THEN plugged it back in. (Which is why the font is SO much bigger
ReplyDeleteit was so tiny before). It's hard not to make changes.
I did the Word thing to. Now that I see some promise in the story, I was tempted to just re-edit the story.
DeleteBut also, my fonts are off a little too. I think this was originally double spaced or something and I took that off. I did somethign weird to part three and all the words look so close together when I plugged it back in. I'm currently troubleshooting that.
Okay, I think I detected a hint of Maxwell becoming a villian in the future y/y
ReplyDeleteMaybe...who knows
DeleteI didn't find the endings to be awkward . . . they just seem ominous
ReplyDeleteI guess less awkward and more random. As I said, this story was just one long document with no breaks.
DeleteUm more like Rule of Awesome to see more Shawna and Erik hilarity
ReplyDeleteAww, thank you ! Erik is always the funny one usually, so I was a bit out of my comfort zone, but I'm glad I wasn't as bad as I thought I was.
DeleteLol, thanks ! And Shawna is being modest, she make me laugh everyday.
DeleteAny hints as to which parts of OHG will be retconned, also can Cortland and Rhett get into a fight at some point ?
ReplyDeleteSpeaking of which does CPShawna have any thoughts on UL or Veritas ?
DeleteUm, as of right now I want to change some names of like towns and things. Maybe a few plot points.
DeleteI'd love to have a Cortland and Rhett fight, but I'm not sure how or why it would happen. I'll keep this as food for thought though. I mean, they did go to college in the same state, so there is a chance they could have met up.
I had to keep writing UL for more swoons !
DeleteAs for Veritas, well, world building is hard you guys !
Wait they are sharing a bed ? I didn't catch that the first time.
ReplyDeleteYeah, they've been sharing a bed, so Alex doesn't have to sleep in the prisoner barracks. Because of reasons.
DeleteIt's because Alex's friends are probably going to be jerks to Alex. That's why he doesn't want to go back there. Duh.
DeleteHoneslty . . . I know of want to learn more about Maxwell and how he learned to do-er-- A Lesson Number 50 ?
ReplyDeleteSomehow I see this becoming an injoke alternative to "down low"
DeleteI know, I have no idea why this wasn't explored more. But, he probably learned before the war or something.
DeleteI need to write some characters giving a lesson number 50.
ReplyDeleteOh, god. What have I started. *hides*
DeleteOh, no SH.. . you did not use Face as an insult.
ReplyDeleteI didn't...
DeleteBut I did !
DeleteIt ended to soon . . . the chapter that is.
ReplyDeleteLol, I'm funny like Erik now (:
lol lol lol lol
You tried...I guess.
DeleteDoes it say something that they are always drinking when they do it ? I
ReplyDeleteRight ? Right ?
DeleteAlex: Yay ! I’m going home.
ReplyDeleteCPShawna: You must be new here
I lol'd
(:
DeleteWas there a lot of rule of cool in BH ? I just thought it had a lot of awesome music.
ReplyDeleteAnd pretty names
DeleteAlso all of SH's Greek Myth-spiration !
DeleteI mean a lot of the fashion choices, ideas about wings and things was because I thought it sounded cool. I think a TDOSH of BH would be less funny and more overly informative. We'll see.
DeleteI love how holographic = future. I mean don't we kind of have those now ? *eyes CNN*
ReplyDeleteWell, these work better and the person with the hologram can see the hologram too.
DeleteI feel lame, what joke did I miss ?
ReplyDeleteOkay, there was a complicated joke where when CPShawna asks me a continuity high five it's continuity from the high five I gave her at the beginning of the chapter.
DeleteSO, the high five is continuity from something that happened earlier. It seemed funny at the time.
My link isn't underlined but it's there !
ReplyDeleteSo is Alex still genetically female ? Or has that changed ? Am I getting to ahead . . .
ReplyDeleteI think I toyed with this, but I think it's safe to say he's just really androgynous. Which honestly doesn't matter in Sundays, since it's never mentioned that he has femenine characteristics. It's not even mentioned he has long hair.
DeleteOMG, loving all the continuity nods CPS. We need to see more of CPS.
ReplyDeleteDo we ? Tell Erik I need another cruise then !
DeleteOh, I see. THis is cute gif, who are those people ?
ReplyDeleteOh, I see. THis is cute gif, who are those people ?
ReplyDeleteThis is awesome ! I love this !
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