Shawna is Dramatic ?

This was a thing I made a while ago

I don't know what I'm doing. I'm not sure my tone was right in my last post, I think I made it sound more finite than I was ready for. I don't want to be gone gone and writing that last post made me go back and start trying to work on some stuff.

I went back to my FZA outline and started picking at it a bit and I'm getting somewhere. I actually had more than I thought. I think it will end up being like Blessed Hearts, where it's just this really weird short thing. It's more fantasy based and it feels so weird to write but I want to get there

I also picked at my UL thing and I know I want to write a about a certain thing but that aside I'm not sure there's any there there. Writing1 from Juliana's POV as an adult...it's more challenging than I thought.

My Haley novella is coming along, in fact it kind of informs a little bit of Sweet Prince. It's about 10,000 words but I've had to cut and re-write a few scenes and I think I may have to do more of that. Speaking of which...

I remembered earlier this week that Blessed Hearts had been re-written into Blessed Hearts. I re-write a lot and I'm hoping that taking this haitus will give me time to look at something and completely re-write it if I get stuck in a corner and not have to take you all along for that ride.

So, let's wrap up Sweet Prince and of course, even though I'll be gone, watch this space for gifs or updates or other things.

Sweet Prince 5

People and Terms To Know
MBC - Mojave Blade Company, the legitimate "front" for the Shy Cartel
Colette Santoro - Daughter of rival cartel leader and Twyla's best friend. She's the only female Covalcotti Rider, a motorcycle assassin. She wasn't in the last chapter so I thought I'd do a recap of her.
Lachlan Banner - Twyla's Dad. A sniper who was recruited by the Shy Cartel and who Sara married. His name will come up.
Minnow Dory - Became Rayne Washington' assistant at 17-years-old and is now training Rias. I mention Minnow because she's the character that's most different than she is in Compulsion/Vice.

Recap
Even though Rayne told him the time wasn't right Haley decides to assassinate Attorney General Kenneth Maxwell at the Mojave Blade Company Family Brunch where Maxwell's husband is speaking but when he gets in the room he changes his target to Maxwell's child. Before he can pull the trigger he is arrested, as is Twyla Banner for trying to take the gun and shoot Maxwell. 

Maxwell lets it slip he wants to run for president and  tries to make a deal with Twyla--if she turns in her cartel family and she goes free--but she refuses and Haley and Twyla are both being taken into prison transport vehicles when Twyla hears a motorcycle in the distance.

Sweet Prince 5
Playlist

- 1 - When We Were Fire by Lon-Fang 
- 2 -  Time by Mikky Ekko
- 3 -  Lost by Rictor
- 4-  Fire by Death Ditto