So, after carrying it around for a while I have Chapter 5 for United Light. I have so much to post about this chapter one that I will be typing it up for tomorrow's entry. I will also be putting my rationale behind the song choices I have chosen also in tomorrow's entry.
The playlist goes for 4 and 5 ???
ReplyDeleteCan't wait to start reading !
ReplyDeleteWhoa, wasn't expecting the f-bomb, great story though
ReplyDeleteWhat ?! Cain is Sawyer's father -- Plot Twist !
ReplyDeleteWhat ?! Cain is Sawyer's father -- Plot Twist !
ReplyDeleteI had a feeling Caine and Sawyer were related, IDK. Can't wait for an update.
ReplyDeleteI am loving Elisa, she is awesome. I wonder who is going to win this love triangle.
ReplyDeleteI don't know why but the I LOL at the way the southern accents were written. No offense to southerners
ReplyDeleteI agree with HappyAppke about the F-word. I love the story though can't wait to see what happens. I think someone else said this story is a little like LG15, I kinda see it.
ReplyDeleteThe playlist makes sooooooo much since know, you are a great writer. I'm feeling the Elisa love to.
ReplyDeleteI don't know, sometimes I think it's a little wierd when writers use brand names, I guess it's something I'd expect from a web serial than a book. I'm so worried someone is going to get thier heart broken.
ReplyDeleteSawyer is sooo sweet, I was not expecting him to be Caine's son. Can we expect anymore plot twist.
ReplyDeleteWonderful story, Shawna. The characters seem to be made for the plot. Don't keep us waiting to long for an update.
ReplyDeleteThe pictures really kept me guessing. I hope Elisa makes it out okay but I can't believe Julianna is in love with Sawyer now. I need to know what happens next.
ReplyDeleteAhhh, you can not end it like that ! !
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ReplyDeleteI love the comments !
@ Darcy_lover -- the playlist is inspiration for the whole story, it is not chapter specific. I'll get into it next entry.
@HappyApple- I know,it was a "go to hell" but, it didn't have the same affect. There will be very few.
@Carleigh-- I know, I've been playing with that idea for a while
@ Desire -- You knew better than I did.
@Lulu -- I don't know either but, I am rooting for someone in particular.
@ Diana -- I wasn't trying to write a southern accent really. I just know a Southerner would not say "you guys" so "ya'll" seemed more appropriate. If you think about it people not from the South use "Ya'll". Any other written dialect was not my own working but the way the characters made it sound.
@ Cinderella_Princess-- Yes, I suppose it is but, I don't know how long I can go into circles. Also I see this story taking another direction If I'm not mistaken LG15 threw in a few unanticipated f-bombs.
@ HuddyFTW--Does it make sense ? I'm glad,I actually found sense within the story from the playlist.
@15minutes -- Not that I know off but Julianna, Sawyer and Elisa may be hiding something from me. And I don't really see this as a plot twist because it does not tragically change the story line
@ Julie -- Hi Julie! I'll get right on it boss
Thank you all, I love the love and am happy to respond to all of you !
ReplyDeleteHilsonFTMFTW- I'm glad the pic kept you guessing. She is not in love with him but she is starting to get feelings and she is equivocating that to love but, it may be real love or even a growing fondness, I have no idea.
Sidney-- I know I said the same thing.