While my dear friend, Linda is taking time to exhale I am moving full speed ahead. I know I haven't posted in a while but, I figured if I didn't post and update it wouldn't matter.
So, I do have an update for you all and a behind the page picture post I am going to post after this had been up for a day. This one is one of my longest at almost 6,000 words.
I have considered posting chapter buttons up to chapter 12 so I won't have to do it every time I post an update (yes, I manage the site). But, I was afraid it may confuse people so, you may see some changes with that.
Here is the update.
The ending was so sad ):
ReplyDeleteElisa is awesome, I'm glad she tried to stand up to Caine.
ReplyDeleteI love Psycho not sure what movie Julianna was watching.
ReplyDeleteI like the new layout of the numbers it's easier to read. I'm assuming there is some symbolism with the color blue.
ReplyDeleteGot to love long chapters !!! I didn't really see any connection to Linda but it's intersting getting "inside" the commune and Elisa is great at calling it as she sees it. I see her becoming a little sympathetic
ReplyDeleteIt's interesting that Sawyer says he puts people ahead of himself, I can see how he is doing that by selling all his stuff for Elisa.
ReplyDeleteThis is my new new favorite chapter, Julianna is really starting to step up.
ReplyDeleteHow can Sawyer not see how much Julianna care ? Men are blind. I can't believe they slept in a house with a broken door
ReplyDeleteDoes Cecila know that Elisa's boyfriend is her brother ?
ReplyDeleteIt's creepy how much sense United Light is starting to make.
ReplyDeleteElisa is one tough cookie.
ReplyDeletehmm, I see some similarities to Spirits but they are written so differently that I found your more believable, I hope they get Elisa back.
ReplyDeleteNice chapter, are there any songs that go with it.
ReplyDeleteNice chapter, are there any songs that go with it.
ReplyDeleteJulie seems so lonely, poor thing
ReplyDeleteYou should make all the chapters this long, At first I wasn't sure if I liked Elisa but she is an interesting character and seems to be a real people person. It's interesting that Julianna seems to be replacing Elisa at work but she can't replace her to Sawyer, if that makes any sense.
ReplyDeleteI don't want to cause any spoliers but I think I'm on to something
ReplyDeleteThat club sounds awesome
ReplyDeleteI think I see symbolism with the three days thing, I forgot all about Larua Ingles wilder, Elisa is hilarious.
ReplyDeleteI don't really get much from Sawyer in this chapter, but I think I'm on the same vibe as Tabitha.
ReplyDeleteJust noticed that sometimes you call Linda Linda and sometimes you call her Miss. Leigh. I also like how they cooks are all female not some random greasy guy, LOL
ReplyDeleteCan't wait for the next update
I have a bad feeling about Rosa, I don't know.
ReplyDeleteI have a bad feeling about Rosa, I don't know.
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ReplyDelete@ Laurie-- Looks like you beat out Linda and Maylights for first comment ! It is sad but, I think we've all been through unrequited love.
@ Maylights- she's a firecracker !
@ Usababe-- I've never seen Psycho, I only get through 3 minutes before I have to turn it off !
@ Petite_b-- There actually isn't it wsa just the color I chose for the glow on the original design so I kept it.
@ Alexa- I love long chapters too ! I think Elisa is very open-minded.
@Darcy_lover -- Yes, he does care.
@Andrea H.- I said she would and she is. I knew Juliana could not be a flat character.
@ Princess-- Sawyer is blind. Blinded by his feelings for Elisa. I don't think the thought of loving Julianna has even crossed his mind.
@Candie-- No, Elisa has never said his name to her but, she does know Sawyer is her half-brother. She learned later in life.
@Carliegh-- Is it ? Don't get any ideas.
@GingerSpice--With a long history
@Bluebelle-- Me too. I think Linda writes about people who are in love and close but, Julianna and Sawyer are still complete strangers.
@Hariku-- Not, really. Some of Linda's songs do go nicely with it. I have had a hard time findng music.
@ S. Carter-- She is the worst kind of lonely. Lonely even though you are around people.
@Linda-- It does make sense. In retrospect I edited this one online so, it may actually be shorter than I said. I may have to put it in word and do an official word count.
@Tabitha-- Maybe ! Don't tell.
@Harley-- It is based on a real club in Miami
@Mallarie-- You do ? Becuase there actually isn't any but, maybe there is.
@Geniphur -- What vibe ? I have to know ? I have chapter 8 written out already so anything I hear will not affect it.
@Desire_me-- Actually it's Bridget and Mithcell, one male and one female (they are married if you would like to know). I will update very soon. Check up in a few hours
@Biteme-- I don't know about her either.