Wednesday, December 22, 2010

Butterflies Fly Away (or The Picture Post !)

New Layout

I made a decision, I love the new blogger. It is so customizable !  I may change my layout every month or so and have it inspired by something.  I already know what next month's theme is. This month's is inspired by a Miley Cyrus album cover I saw when Pandora gave me a Miley Cyrus song (I have no idea what Matt Nathanson and Party in the USA have in common) .  I just liked the font look so, I tried to copy it.






Who's ready for some pictures ?

 I figured since Mimic does take a time leap I should find some new photo inspirations and it amazed me how easily I found some of them.




Kristopher Grace (19)













That is a picture of a young Keanu Reeves. I am actually surprised how many half-Asian actors there are out there including Dean Cain, Tyson Beckford, Chad Michel Murray.

I am also surprised nobody was curious that in CTE, Sara's husband has been dead for 5 years and yet she has a 1 year old son. If someone had asked I'm sure I would have told who his father was.

As I drafted Veritas last February, I knew I wanted one section to have someone who was a child in the original be an adult in the sequels.

I imagine I may have thrown you all off because I realize Kris's name is only said 2 or 3 times in CTE and Hidden. His name was spelled Christopher but, every time I looked at it in Mimic I hated the way it looked. I don't know why I chose that name to begin with. I changed the spelling after seeing a Kris Allen song on the playlist.




Alan Gray (38) and Minnow Dory  (34)




















Those pictures are of Josh Lucas and Rachel McAdams (I know she is 32), incidentally enough these two actually dated. Josh Lucas is probably best known as the basketball coach in Glory Road. I have no idea where that particular picture of him is from. McAdam's is from an Elle photoshoot it inspired the dress Minnow wears.


Bonus photo ! ( I love this photo of RM , I had to post it too. The look on her face and lighting really inspired that first scene with Minnie)













Hidden  follows the journey that  leads Alan to becoming a black market surgeon. It starts with him being disgusted by the idea of surgery with Cleoand then accepting it more and more with each patient or doctor he encounters until he gets to Minnow. I originally wanted Alan to change his name to Blackbird and take over for him but, I decided against it. There are a few hints in Hidden about his future.


" He put my leg through an x-ray machine. He didn’t speak much, like Blackbird.
I suppose that is a tactic of geniuses."
--Chapter 8
and then the epilogue.
"I became Channing’s apprentice
Now I work quietly"


Many of you picked up on a creepy vibe with Alan  and Minnow that's what I wanted.
They are both very broken people. Alan  has devoted  his entire adult life to  Minnow  and  nothing else because he feel responsible for what happened to her.

Minnow is very humbled because she got a second chance at life and it traumatized by what happened to her. They  both can't move on which is why they  keep everything.

By the way did anyone catch that the handkerchief Alan clots Julian's blood with is the one Haley wipes Alan's eyes with in Hidden ?


Sara Grace (46) , Twyla Grace (12) & Luce Grace (29)











Julianne Moore, Elle Fanning and Jesse Spencer (doesn't he look particularity evil in that picture ? )

The plan last spring was for the story to be about Luce but, I also really wanted to set it in the night between 2099 and 2100. I was nervous about making the characters so much older but, now I am pretty set about it.

The fact that Kris refers to Jean and Minnow as Aunt and Uncle is supposed to reflect Sara's relationship to them as opposed to Alan. Sara was friends with the Dorys a year before she went on the  run with her husband so at this point they have a 26 year friendship.

Jean Dory (42)


















I love this picture of Johnny Depp because Jean has personal space issues and in this image JD  is so close to Keith Richards (the Rolling Stone who play's Jack Sparrow's dad). I think this is from Entertainment Weekly when PoTC 3 came out.

So, yes these characters are older but, still very much anti-heroes.

Part 2

This was originally going to only be two part short story and was drafted as such.  After posting the first section and battling all the story line ideas that came at me like bats, I decided to make this a little longer.

I will say this now, the story uses a retrospective narrative as the storytelling device.  I actually hate this when I read it in a book but, I like it here because in some aspects the retrospective stories are more important than the main plot line.

Part 2

Playlist (In the sidebar )

-1- Ghosts of Reach -- Halo Reach Theme
-2- Collide by Howie Day (thank you Lile for brining this song into my life, I love it !)
-3- A Day Without Rain by Enya

32 comments:

  1. I'm sorry honey I stopped at Johnny Depp ! By the way I get to *murdereyes* you about a song you used a while ago !

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  2. I didn't look at the scroll bar thing and I didn't realize how short this chapter was ):

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  3. "Oh, so you're robots that have been asleep for almost two decades and you want me to help you get home ? um, okay---road trip !"

    Idk that is how I would react.

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  4. Julianna Moore is perfect, she is such a great actress, I can imagine her as Sara Grace.

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  5. At first I thought the Neighbor was Allison and I was going to ask what happened to her.

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  6. AI with feelings ? I've watched enough movie to know this isn't going well.

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  7. At the rate he is looking the original inspiration for Alan (Tom Felton) looks to be in his late 30's.

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  8. Alan is totally lying about that piece of artwork.

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  9. Alan is totally lying about that piece of artwork.

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  10. Elle and Milo are pretty names, I'm glad thier are not like Adam and Eve or Alpha and Beta, or something wierd like that.

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  11. Perhaps I am reading to much into this but is there reason Kris refers to Allison and her husband as "Mrs and Mr", because he is used to alpha females and I also noticed that Elle introduced herself and Milo.

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  12. Poor Jean, he is such a bad example ):

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  13. Wow, I had no idea video games had soundtracks. It is a little thing but I thought Alan and Minnie were three years apart.

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  14. First of all this chapter was to short ]:

    Second of all it was really interesting I felt like I was watching a movie on the syfy channel.

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  15. I love that you used and Interrobang

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  16. btw, honey as the person who introduced me to retrospective I love it !

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  17. OMFG, Keanu what happened ? Rachel Macadams is super-lovely

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  18. I guess when Alan mentioned his father's funeral in part 1, Kris already knew about it.

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  19. I really really wonder how Kris survivied. I bet he is like a robot to or something.

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  20. Even the "girl" AI that Alan met at the Life Summit was illegal too ?

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  21. Was Luce's story line in Hidden tied up or is there still something we should be looking for ? Just curious.

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  22. Any thoughts on how old Milo and Elle look like ? Or will there be a picture post !

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  23. Wow, does RM have PINK hair ? It looks good on her.

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  24. Wow, does RM have PINK hair ? It looks good on her.

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  25. Are you keeping the banner (that Erik Vandalized) the same now ? It is super cute it makes me smile whenever I see it.

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  26. Would Veritas read as one work or would you say they are separate "books" if you will.

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  27. ". . .battling all the story line ideas that came at me like bats, "

    For some reason that really freaked me out.

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  28. Linda--I knew you would !

    October s- Actually, it is about 4,000 words I just didn't double space

    Carliegh-- You comment made me laugh ! I'm sure Michael Bay would see dollar signs.

    SiverP-- I love Julianne Moore. I was going to blog more about her but, deleted it for next time.

    Calla- The neighbor was Belle. I love your username.

    Maylights-- . . .

    HappyApple-- Yeah, I noticed but hey he is rich !

    Constance-- No, it is artwork. It is supposed to relate to where Kris leaves they don't have things just because they are pretty to look at.

    CranberriV- Oh, I thought about it.

    Natalie-- I hate to say yes you are looking to much into it but it has no significance. The Mr and Mrs. was probably me.

    Ft. Life-- He has no reason to be a good example. He is one of those carefree peter an syndrome people.

    NMC-- Alan turns 20 (in Hidden) when she is still 16.

    Matow-- Thanks, hon. I hate that they changed the spelling of their name to distance themselves from their Science Fiction roots.

    California Blues-- I am always hesitant about it but, I want to express ? and ! at the same time.

    Lile-- I've never done this much of it before though. I was hesitant.

    Bluebelle-- I know, I love Rachel McAdams she is more than Regina King.

    Coraline-- Yes, he was subtly reminding him.

    Trichelle-- All I will say is the Today show does about a million stories on mirculous survivals.

    NillaLatte-- Yes. You know she was originally going to be in this instead of Milo and Elle but, I changed my mind.

    Petunia-- It is tied up in the sense that any questions you may have will remain an eternal mystery.

    Tabitha-- I don't really have any but, I can find some. I imagine they are very nondescript looking.

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  29. Tanya-- I know ! She even had it in some red carpet pictures.

    Nurse Tina-- I actually have a "vance"-dalized and "unvance"-dalized copy. I will change it back to the normal one late though, it was just a joke.

    Tanya-- They are totally seperate series but, I guess you would need to read them all to really understand. I will find a good term and get back to you.

    Appletini-- *mini-blog* I can't explain it. For instance the funeral was not in the original draft.I wrote the line where Alan implies his dad is dead and I got this idea about writing the funeral but, I had to say "no that is not in the original story" and take it out of my mind. Then I had an idea for how his dad died but, I told myself "no it does not fit into the story" and swat it away. I kept wanting to write it and wanting to write it until I said "Fine how can I squeeze this in" It happened a lot with some ideas that would make better serials than flashbacks.

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  30. For some reason your answer made my head hurt !

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  31. I guess I was asking how old do they look

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  32. Petunia- Oh, hm . . .I guess the short answer is yes.

    Tabitha-- Late 20's early 30's. They appear to Kris to be older than him.

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