Saturday, March 22, 2014

Blessed Souls Redux



HMLIS Origins
So, I usually wait until the end of a serial to do this, but I wanted  to explain a bit how HMLIS came to be.

Ever since I decided I was going to kill all the characters in BH and reincarnate them as humans with no memory of being angels and new lives I had one scene in my head. It was of a girl (Rin) and her boyfriend (Dark) using a stolen credit card to buy persciption drugs and then getting high in his mom (the Demon Queen) house. And then there was going to be an art student (Soul)...I just had no idea what they were going to do, but somehow they were going to go back to being who they were. I have an outline(ish) for this...it was called Blessed Souls. This is literally all the outline looked like for a year except with 2 scenes (that I may still use) lined out:



A coming of age story about a girl on the cusp of discovering what her life is going to be about. She has to make decesions for the first time in her life including who she lets into her life.

Corrine- Living in a group home which she sneaks out of to see her boyfriend. She is a high school senior who has no idea who she is outside of the guy she is seeing. She can’t see beyond the moment and is often trapped in depression and is looking for something beautiful in life.

Soul - A musical students who has drive and feels an amount of guilt and is fascianted by Rin’s freedmon,


Dark - Bad influence who clings to Corrine and her existence. He needs her.


 But then I took a break from Serial-ing and when I came back, that BH world wasn't in me anymore. Even worse...I had NO RECOLLECTION of writing it, so how could I even begin a sequel. Still deep down I wanted to write the girl who would be Corrine. As you all know, I pushed it back and rebooted Vice, but  I eventually got back when I saw something that I will talk more about later.

I Did A Thing
So,I guess one thing I learned from doing  HMLIS while doing Vice is that I like working in two different worlds and having another serial to work on as a "break". So, when I was getting particularly fustrated about a part of HMLIS, I started working some on Vice 2.

I'm mostly just writing scratch scenes and story vomit, but so far it's 1,000 words.

Hmm, I suppose this will beg some UL questions...I haven't written anything, but it will probably end up being a novella - length thing. The only thing I really have done is the title and plot.

Chapter 3
Previously...Boy Meets Girl. Other Girl Meets Boy. Boy Tells Other Girl That Girl is Dead. 
Chapter 3

Playlist
So, that music thing where they talk about the song that is playing is going to happen a couple more times.

- 1- It's Time by Imagine Dragons (Of course they make an appearance)
- 2- Give Me Love by Ed Sheerhan (He had to have been on someone's Top 40 bingo)
 -3- Spirited Away by Joe Hishani (More violins!)


44 comments:

  1. Honey, I ADORE Give Me Love. That temp is so upbeat ! Wow, I may have to start catching up with you.

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    1. I love this song too ! I actually don't think it's Top 40, but Ed Sheeran definitely is.

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  2. Jonah is learning so much from Corrine ! I think they make a great foils to one another.

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    1. Yes, foils is the perfect way to describe them. I never thought of it like that.

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  3. Okay, I'm sensing something with the bridge. I mean why there ?

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    1. Right !!! that's what I was sayin'. Plust that dad's lesser known book is about the bridge. . . so. . . yeah.

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    2. Well, his Dad's book is about the college...

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  4. Aw, I wanted to assume Abigail was based on Seraphim. Can we get the 411 on her characters back-story in BH.

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    1. All I knew about Seraphim was she was a swimmer, I never really knew how she died.

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  5. “I feel like I’ve already made it weird by being dead.” She jokes.

    So funny. So awkwardly funny.

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    1. There are a few awkward death jokes in here.

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  6. UL UL UL !!! I never thought it'd happen.

    *we so excited*

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    1. I'm excited too. What I'm thinking of doing is what I wish UL2 (god, that name...maybe I do need to TDOSH it) had been.

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  7. I can't unsee Blue Ginger as the punch line to a joke about redheads. . . or Irish people.

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    1. Oh, I need to write something related to this for my next post. I meant to include it here.

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  8. I am just jamming to this playlist. I think it really fits the tone of the story.

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  9. I feel like something really tragic happened to Abigail, she seems so sweet though.

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    1. I'm glad you caught on to how sweet Abigail is. I wanted her to be a "girl next door" type.

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  10. I can imagine it is super frustrating to have characters and a scene but not a thing for them to do. It sounds like it would have been amazing.

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    1. I know ! But, I mean I literally didn't know what to do...it just sat there for an embarrassingly long amount of time.

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  11. Oh, I bet something ON the phone set Abigail off.

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  12. Was it mentioned if Jonah has always been able to see dead people.

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    1. I would think so, he doesn't seem that freaked out.

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    2. No, he hasn't, Jonah's not really the kind of person who freaks out over things.

      Also, his first meeting with her isn't really present in the story, it kind of glossed over so I could keep you in the dark that she was dead. By the time he tells Corrine he's known Abigail for 2 weeks.

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  13. I know it's been said before but I just love love love Corrine ! She just does not hold back.

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    1. She really doesn't have a filter...I also think she can be brasher than she intends to be.

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  14. Would Blessed Souls (totally shouldn't make that just initials) have been a happy or bittersweet ending.

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    1. Um, probably a happy one.

      Also, LOL, wow I did not look at how that title would look as initials. Well, glad that's tucked safely in the vault.

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  15. I don't know what I love more the pre-chappy tidbits or the playlist tidbits

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  16. Did a thing ? SH looks like you are doing THINGS !

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    1. Yeah, but I really was going to take a big long break from Vice, but it pulled me in...I guess it's my Vice. (;

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  17. Did a thing ? SH looks like you are doing THINGS !

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  18. Hmm, SH I just realized we should change our Icon things. Hmmm

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    1. Lol, we should. Yours is WAY older than mine though ! (;

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  19. So much mystery this chapter was waaay to short.

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    1. Yeah, there are going to be a few shorties, but I'm planning some double chapter posts.

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  20. How come the cop in Chapter 2 doesn't realize that Corrine is a freshman and therefore shouldn't have a car?


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    1. This will get answered a little bit later, but the cop didn't know she was a freshman.

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  21. Jonah kind of reminds me of Dacry from IVB. I don't know maybe it's his demeanor. He just seems so collected on the inside.

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    1. Jonah is a little more srs bznz than Darcy is. Like when Jonah has a joke, he doesn't say it out loud, it's mostly kept to himself while Darcy will tell everyone what he is thinking.

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  22. But there is a chapter on the bridge ? Y/Y ?

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