Thursday, December 10, 2009

No Excuses

I hate to admit it but, I got to a point where I had no clue what was going to happen next. I'm still looking for some fresh inspiration.This chapter is mostly about writing so the music was just inspirational and songs I like. There are some odd numerical coincidences in this chapter.


Mirages



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16 comments:

  1. Linda LeighDecember 10, 2009 at 2:24 PM

    Hi, Honey

    It's great to see an update

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  2. MarciaDecember 10, 2009 at 2:25 PM

    I really loved the writing in this chapter, it flowed so naturally

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  3. CarleighDecember 10, 2009 at 2:26 PM

    I had a nagging feeling we would hear from Cortland in this chapter, I feel kind of sorry for him.

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  4. TabbyDecember 10, 2009 at 2:27 PM

    Juliana should have tied Rhett up somewhere and left him. He is a pretty cool character but I don't trust him.

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  5. RedRoseDecember 10, 2009 at 2:28 PM

    Yeah, GSC ! I saw the C and S and hoped it was them.

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  6. RedRoseDecember 10, 2009 at 2:28 PM

    Yeah, GSC ! I saw the C and S and hoped it was them.

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  7. NatalieDecember 10, 2009 at 2:30 PM

    Shawna ? Where have you been, LOL.

    I agree the writing in this chapter was amazing. I think the characters have so many good intetnions that it's hard to distinguish "good" from "evil".

    I was surprised to see Cortland again I didn't really see how he fit into the chapter but it did provide closure for Juliana.

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  8. SawlisaDecember 10, 2009 at 2:32 PM

    I thought it was funny how Greg gave Rhett a taste of his own medicine he deserves it.

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  9. BlueBelleDecember 10, 2009 at 2:34 PM

    Yeah ! an Update. I love the song 23 it's so pretty ! Is there a reason this chapter is called Mirages with an S ?

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  10. KandiDecember 10, 2009 at 2:36 PM

    I saw Juliana trying to "get into" Rhett's head as something she could have learned from Caine. The hostility between Rhett and Greg was well written to. No more huge breaks, Shawna. JK !

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  11. Ribbons34December 10, 2009 at 2:38 PM

    I thought the familiar face Juliana saw was Greg but I guess it was Cortland, tricky tricky !

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  12. Bernette C.December 10, 2009 at 2:39 PM

    Daughters by John Mayer always reminds me of "I'm Yours" by Jason Mraz, the musicality anyways.

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  13. MaylightsDecember 10, 2009 at 2:41 PM

    I think when Rhett is uncomfortable he starts shouting insults. When he was telling Juliana not to be impressed by College I think he felt insecure.

    to much ?

    Keep it up, SH

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  14. CranberriVodkaDecember 10, 2009 at 2:44 PM

    I thought it was sad that Cece's mom didn't get in. Please don't go all Deathly Hallows on the characters like JKR, Shawna.

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  15. Rachel B.December 10, 2009 at 2:45 PM

    ^ LOLZ

    So, did they leave the Car at the airport ? I'd be afraid Caine could track them.

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  16. ShawnaDecember 10, 2009 at 10:40 PM



    @Linda -- I know, I've been absent but, I haven't forgotten

    @Marcia-- Honestly that is how it was written I had no idea where it was going.

    @Carleigh-- It was added in one of the many glossings of this chapter.

    @Tabby-- While he feel no bond for her she feels one for him. It goes back to what Cortland said about her imprinting on people.

    @RedRose-- I have some detectives on here ! I do love to add foreshadow.

    @Natalie -- I know I know . . . no excuse ): I honestly can't 100% explain Cortland in this chapter.

    @Swalisa-- Yep, it was unintentional but for all fairness Rhett did not tie anyone up.

    @BlueBelle- Um . . . no

    @Kandi-- A few days ago I could not have promised this but, now I totally can. No more breaks.

    @Ribbons34- I know I was afraid of that, it wasn't meant to be a diversion.

    @Bernette-- It does !

    @Maylights-- You got it. It surprises me how in tune people are with *my* characters

    @CranberriVodka-- I have no clue what will happen next so I can't make promises.

    @Rachel- They did leave it.

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