Mini (TGIT-ish) Gif Posts

I can't think of a blog so.....GIF Post

On Bellum II

Me After Every Chapter (Particularly Chapter 5)

Pariphina 5eva!

My General Reaction to Paris

And Now that Seraphina is gone and he's called Isobel. Well....

™Moving on....

Plotting the Christmas Story

I've got a few scraps of ideas, but nothing full

How I Consider Ending All My Serials When I'm Desperate

One scene or line or ending in every chapter of Vice from here on out

I'd Really Like to Write Two Love Interests Like This

                                                         But They Are Always More Like This

Then This

So, I'm thinking of finally writing that OHG rewrite. Just remember:

And by people I mean SHV

But I'm Really Going to Try and Maybe I'll have something by Spring

Your Faces Right Now Since I Bring up UL Once every couple of months

It Will Be A Slow Process. Just need to limber out the UL muscles

 

Me On the Outside 

Me On the Inside

So, Muse

Also This Gif I just found, because Corinne was pretty much invented by KStew's closed lip snarl  thing in the beginning of this Gif. Also, I kind of love her Post-Twilight smile.

Let's Talk About Chapter Six
It's occurring to me it makes more sense to talk about the previous chapter that goes with this section and not just the previous chapter with the B storyline. So, I'll talk about Ch. 7 next post

Last post I talked a little bit about how yes, Rayne is the father of Sara's baby. And as the novella was supposed to hint at, Rayne and Ivy have broken up..although it's platonic so I guess it's more of a conscious uncoupling ? Even in the Veritas!world I always saw Rayne's marriage as being very cold and I couldn't figure out why and then I did...it was an arranged marriage.

Chapter Eight
Rayne and Ivy are done, Luce and Ivy both feel outsted by the baby and Minnow and Alan run into Dakota while running to get shoes for a party. What is this party about anyway ?

Chapter 8

Playlist

-1- Silhouette by Active Child w/ Ellie Goulding

-2- Don't Wake Me Up by Avicci  Remix

-3- Work Song by Hozier

Challenge Accepted ?

 
A Christmas Story ?
So, I've accepted this challenge, Lile. I will say though, I'll probably do two stories---one cracky and one a little more serious.

Okay, off to see if  the Michael Buble Christmas CD is on Spotify (it is) !

No Need To Call Maury
So, I think it is safe to say that you all get that Rayne is the father of Sara's child. Their child was actually conceived in Vice, but I wasn't sure if I was ever going to use it.

In chapter 12 of Vice everyone (including Rayne) is at Sara's apartment as she is hacking someone out of the draft. After they do that Alan leaves to go talk to Jean and Sara makes him take Luce with him leaving her alone with Rayne.

Then when they get chased back an hour later Rayne  is gone and Sara is alone and taking a nap on the couch (because she is...tired *wink) and then Sara doesn't ever drink the rest of the serial.

Chapter 7 or Things I've Googled That Have Me on A Watch List
So, this is another short chapter and the last super short one I see in the forecast. I was just getting my bearings in these early chapters  so that's why there are so many in the beginning.

So, back to Fort Harmony. Alex refused an offer from Sgt. Maxwell to go home and has settled into being a model prisoner while Harlow was given two weeks in solitary for refusing to work and talking back...

Chapter 7 (also, I just realized I re-used a line from a previous serial...see if you can spot it. I felt like I was having dejavu everytime I read it until it finally clicked.)
Playlist
-1- Your Hand in Mine by Explosions in The Sky
-2- Wait by M83 (either i've used this before, or I've been waiting forever to use this song)

I've Run Out of Things to Blog About

In law school I’d been attracted to one of the professors and we’d had a number of tumbles in the sheets. I’d drink in his opinions on law and politics in bed all night. My sexual appetite had grown with the stress and competition of law school.  I’d had a number of lovers and discovered quite a few kinks.


So, I do a lot of re-reading when I'm working on a serial, particularly with this one. After I post a chapter I usually start re-reading from the point before I write more. And while I'm re-reading I usually change and edit things.I'll change names, descriptions and wording or even add stuff.

For chapter 5, I was looking at the above paragraph and I originally had the word fetish instead of kink. I assumed fetish and kink meant the same thing, but I looked it up and they actually mean two different things; a kink in about partner intimacy and a fetish isn't.

Anyway, in the process I stumbled across wikipedia's page on paraphilia and I have to say there are some interesting ones like Autassassinophilia, sexual arousal from almost being killed and somnophilia which is sexual arousal from seeing people sleep...I don't think any of these will be making appearances in my serial, but I did go down a sexual health rabbit hole.

Actually, it's interesting homosexuality was legitimately  considered a type of sexual disorder 40 years ago so in 85 years who knows what our culture will have to change it's mind about.

Also they rarely find women who have paraphillic disorders and if they do they are usually sadists, which is interesting.

BTW, I don't suggest reading this paraphilia page because there are a lot of gross ones. I mean really.

Chapter 4 -5
So, we finally put Haley and Maxwell together...but things are different. One of the things I don't think got across in Sundays is that Maxwell is putting on an act a lot of the time.  He's self-concious and unsure and is trying to stay under the radar so he doesn't get in anymore trouble. But Maxwell is also super smart so when given a job he's to smart for...well, who knows what might happen.

I originally was going to have Harlow make someone eat a bug and I just couldn't do it. I had some dark plans for this serial, but I've been wimping out a lot. More on this later.

Chapter Six
So, this chapter was one chapter that was split in half so it's more of a set up. This is also the one with two mini flash fics.

We're back to Alan, who has become fully entrenched in cartel life...and is fighting with Minnow for reasons he doesn't remember...also Sara has a baby ? Daddywatch 2100

Chapter Six (It's a shortie)
Playlist
-1- We Might Be Dead by Tomorrow by Soko (should have named the serial this...)
-2- Finally Moving by Pretty Lights

Shawna Found the Model Tags on Tumblr

This is my Maxwell picspiration...any guesses who this is ?

It's beardless Joe Manginello !

The Original Crew Characters

Alan, 20

I found Otto Seppalainen on the Tumblr model tag

Sara Grace (32) & Luce Grace (14) Natalie Portman (Except, red head.)

Asa Butterfield

Jean Dory (24) Minnow Dory (17)

Jared Leto

Ashley Greene

 Persephone (20) and El ( late 30's ?)  (They don't show up a lot)

Blake Lively (mostly, her hair)

David Beckham

  The B Storyline Characters

 Kenneth Maxwell, 33

Did I mention Maxwell has a body model...

Thomas Sangters unique face.... that let's him play 13 in GoT when he's 23 !

Emil Andersson's preeety hair. Also Dane Deehan's eyes

Harlow Haley,  22

Young Sebastian Stan.

Isla Haley, 21 (She doesn't show up a lot)

Jane Levy

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Thomas Sangster is the third picspiration that happened to be in the Maze Runner film. If you're keeping count that's Dylan O'Brien (Rhett Clark) Kaya Scoldero (Corinne) and Thomas Sansgter (Haley)

DOUBLE CHAPTER POST !!!!

To keep up with pacing, we're going back to Alex and Harlow.  Harlow tries to frame Alex for stealing a pair of shoes, but now they've both been arrested with two of Harlow's friends for stealing a pair of shoes. To make matters worse, Harlow has drugs in the pocket of the jacket Alex was wearing...

Chapter 4 + Chapter 5
Playlist

Chapter 4
-1- Highway by Olafur Arnalds
-2- Dark Becomes Light by The Album Leaf

Chapter 5
-1- Broken Arrow by The Album Leaf

Brotherly Love ?

I Said It'd Never Be Done
So...here we are, there are two POVs going on in Compulsion and one of them has the characters from Sundays, told through the perspective of Harlow. Why Harlow ? Because honestly in TDOSH I learned that Haley's POV is really lacking. Also I have another reason, but we will get to that later...


You guys, I wrote Sundays nearly 4 years ago and after I posted it I'd convinced myself I'd never look at it again. But after TDOSH I  just kept thinking, and thinking and thinking and suddenly I had an actual story for those characters.

I was writing Compulsion!Harlow/Alex at the same time I was writing Jonah/Ethan so there relationships kind of parallels but the Harlow/Alex one is a huge extrapolation to Jonah/Ethan dynamic.


BTW LiLe, Harlow Haley (HH) has been making some appearances on your blog , agreeing with all the messed up things the character do.I'm surprised I didn't get called out on this...

HHOctober 17, 2014 at 11:25 PM

Lol, that blunt object joke was some dark humor…but I thought it was hilarious.

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Linda LeighOctober 17, 2014 at 11:32 PM
I could get darker, lol.




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HHOctober 13, 2014 at 6:19 PM
Lile, maybe this is meta, but do you think Martin could have ever been good or did his parents completely screw that up for him ? It seems like he could have been decent if Clierro weren't in the picture.

Also, you love Claudia, but I kind of love Derek.
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Linda LeighOctober 13, 2014 at 7:17 PM
I agree, I think Martin's parents ruined him. I mean they killed someone and covered and up and got married becuase they. . . had to. . . and Roger was a drunk . . . wait.




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HHSeptember 26, 2014 at 11:49 PM

I just don’t hate Fierro here, he is doing and saying what he needs to to survive...
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NYCBaristaOctober 18, 2014 at 11:44 PM
Helios is such a condescending do*chebag. I wonder why he has to show off all the time...also what do you imagine he is talking about with those guys ? I mean don't SGI have to keep most of what they do secret ?
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HHOctober 18, 2014 at 11:45 PM

And yet..I don’t hate him.

Linda LeighOctober 18, 2014 at 11:48 PM
@ NYCBarista - hmm, maybe they want him to get rid of some vampires at CVS... or maybe they want his help to take down a new drug cartel that just came on the scene. IDK ?

@HH - I like him too. . . kind of... this comment is on to something tiny.


 
 (Harlow is supposed to be a little bit crazy, so I'm concerned with how much you agree with him.)

Ahead of the Game
Fun fact; I finally took my chapters from Word and put them in Yola and I have 10 chapters done..now because this is two stories it's more like 3 chapters each, but it's a record for me to be this far ahead. I'm not sure if this means I will be able to post faster, because I want to stay ahead, but it's a nice start.
 
Compulsion 3
So to recap; Alan is turning 20 and dodging bar shoot outs and Haley is being arrested... 


Compulsion 3
Playlist
-1- Suspects by Olafur Arnulds
-2- Au Revior by One Republic ( I will make use of the entire Native Album)