The Process
Oh, the process. I wanted to blog on something with this chapter post, so I decided to post on the process of my other works in very little progress. I haven't lost the spark for Veritas, I am working diligently on it and the Q&A. The Q&A will be posted at a later date.
I can tell you that the reboot is a very different story. It won't be what you are used to . . .
What I'm finding the hardest is coming up with a name ! I don't know if you've noticed, but I've always had a hard time coming up with names. My best effort was with Sundays, because the day Sunday was reoccuring in the work. I have to admit I originally wanted to call Veritas "The Melancholy of Alan Gray" but, it doesn't fit the story. Most cyberpunk stories/novels are one word.
Blessed Hearts
Okay, I have noticed BH unintentionally has A LOT of similarties with LL. I mean A LOT ! I promise I'm not doing it on purpose. We haven't gotten to them just yet. . .
All the songs are YouTube clips !
Chapter 5
Rin has been captured,taken in by Soul Lyre, and she just kissed him . . .
-1- The Engagement by Alexandre Desplat
-2- Bulletproof Weeks by Matt Nathanson
-3- Looking Back Kerry Muzzey (Bonus points if you can listen and figure out what TV show this song is used alot in !)
Chapter 5
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Oh, Honey I love Matt Nathanson. I can't believe I haven't heard this one. The music was perfect. With he videos it stopped at just the right part !
ReplyDeleteI think it's an older song, I've been holding on to it for a while ! What can I say, I've learned from the best when it comes to music.
DeleteGah ! I'm scared because this is chapter 5 meaning we have two left. I'm starting to see how this story can have so many parts to it.
ReplyDeleteIt's actually 9 chapters so, we have four (possibly 5) left.
DeleteWait a minute . . . is the carriage floating ?
ReplyDeleteIs it ? Is it ? . . .it's not. Um, it's driven by pegasus (pegasi ?), but I didn't want to say that. I didn't want to get bogged down in having to describe them.
DeleteFor some reason I was able to really visualize this chapter, amazing !
ReplyDeleteThanks ! I'm so glad !
DeleteIs the music from Once Upon A Time ? It sounds like he background music
ReplyDeleteNo. It's glee
DeleteRin seems really down-to-earth (lol), goal oriented, she just seems kind of strict with herself. Am I right ?
ReplyDeletePerfectly. She has had a life carved out for her and she intends to follow it. She is very straight laced. And you know what I love to do to straight laced people . . .
DeleteNext to chapter 3 this one is my favorite. Although I imagine Soul doesn't have the best "moves".
ReplyDeleteNope. Not even close to Jagger (;
DeleteOkay, Pius is a person. Who is he . . .
ReplyDeleteWell he's a doctor. Maybe he gave birth to Soul.
DeleteWell he's a doctor. Maybe he gave birth to Soul.
DeleteI'm really interested in the human World/Angel demon world relationship. I hope we get to learn more about it.
ReplyDeleteOMG, those poor sheep.
ReplyDeleteI know, I know, but you do what you have to . . .
DeleteSo, did Erik make those brownies ? *if you know what I mean*
ReplyDeleteI walked right into that one. That's why Erik isn't allowed to make brownies. Ever.
DeleteI can really see the contrast between Soul and Rin. He seems sweet and full of wonderment.
ReplyDeleteHi Redrose. I can really see this. Oh Shawna were inspired by me. If so I'm really flattered but i'm married and so are you !!!!(that's still going on right ?)
DeleteIf not, I'm not offended. I wish I could write stuff people gush over like you do.
MaTow
Actually, Soul seems kind of like a Mama's boy but can you blame him.
DeleteI honestly wasn't thinking of you Mansfield.
DeleteYes, Soul is very much attached to his mother . . .
I always thought Veritas was a kick-a name "The Melancholy of Alan Gray sounds really introspective though !
ReplyDeleteI know. But, it doesn't lend itself to sequels. I'm glad you like Veritas.
DeleteWhoa. Rin has 10 sisters ! Do we know how many kids her faher had with each wife ?
ReplyDeleteWell, I don't know really. . .
DeleteDon't worry SH we would never accuse you of Insta-love !
ReplyDeleteInsta-Love is like when they fall head over heels for NO apparent reason, but with PR stories there is room for explanations.
DeleteHelp Shawna ! I thought I saw a part where Rin says that Angels mostly care about doing good or something. Was I seeing things ?????
ReplyDeletePossibly. Who does she say it to ?
DeleteUm. I think she says it to Soul when he says he wants to stay in Eden ????
DeleteI'm jonesing for some clothes picspirations !
ReplyDeleteMe too. I couldn't find any. Actually . . .
DeleteThis chapter was so short. I'm so into BH I forgot all about Veritas. Dare I ask how UL is ?
ReplyDeleteUL is slowly being planned. I am debating in my head what to keep, change and throw out.
DeleteI peeked at the music and now all I can see is a close up of Lea Michelle's face after someone tells her off.
ReplyDeleteMe too ! I also imagine Will looking longingly after Emma.
DeleteThe Ivy Brother title was GOLD !
ReplyDeleteTY ! I have to say the early ones were my best titles.
DeleteTheory time, Ya'll. I'm thinking reincarnation and the dreams are actually memories. come at me !
ReplyDeleteMemories from what ? I'm sure Rin didn't just wash up like Seraphim did. She'd remember that wouldn't she ?
DeleteWould that even be possible with Soul being half human
DeleteI wonder how Soul would fair if hew as raised in the human world.
ReplyDeleteMe too. He wouldn't know he was part Demon. Which would make this a more traditional YA paranormal.
DeleteI feel so bad for Thea. I thought she would be mean and creepy like Dark, but she seems nice. . . for a demon.
ReplyDeleteMmhmm.
DeleteGabriel's death seems like such nightmare fuel. Even being burned while dead is just ):
ReplyDeleteI take it you won't cremated. This will actually come back later . . .
DeleteDoes he even say Bulletproof in the song ? I wonder why it's called that.
ReplyDeleteI think he does. It's just really elongated and changed.
DeleteI am so addicted to these updates. Need new chapters !
ReplyDeleteCute username ! I need new chapter too ! I really wish they'd write themselves.
DeleteHe carried the murder weapon on him ? Come on now!
ReplyDeleteHe took it with him. In my head he showed it to Thea to impress her . . .
DeleteHe carried the murder weapon on him ? Come on now!
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