Let's talk chapter 5
Okay, so not much to say about this one. I just want to do some attempt at blogging each time! Chapter 5 is sort of a bridge chapter. I'm glad a lot of you are picking up on the differences between Rin and Soul. I didn't intentionally create such a strong character in Rin (in fact . . . well, I'll come back to that).
More Random inspirations !
I have some more pics on my desktop I thought I'd share. I kind of picture hoard when dreaming up serials even if I never use the images. These two pics were my other two inspirations for Soul. I think it's the vest thing . . . Darren's eyes just look so honest !
This infamous mug shot of Frank Sinatra was very Melchoir Dark-eqsue. I
This photo made me think of Rin and Soul's meeting
This person looks like how I kind of imagined Gabriel. I don't know who this is though.
This is what I imagine Seraphim wears on a daily basis.
Chapter 6
I promise this one will make up for a lack of photos in the last couple of chapters. This is my favorite chapter so far . . .
Playlist
-1- The Canon on violin
-2- Safe and Sound by Taylor Swift
-3- Viva La Vida Meets Love Story by John Schmidt
-4- Sad Love Story by Yiruma (this man is a genius !--also this song is a Youtube link)
-5- Strange and Beautiful by Aqualung
Soul Lyre isn't the bad guy and he just asked a very powerful angel for her hand in courtship . . .
CHAPTER SIX
Such a dark chapter, I see why the playlist is black.
ReplyDeleteI recopied the embed code for the first time since I restarted. Before I was just copying the embed code from previous posts.
DeleteAnyway, black was the default color. I didn't make it that way on purpose. I promise !
Such a dark chapter, I see why the playlist is black.
ReplyDeleteIt was so sad when Rin had to close her eyes to walk past her brothers room. . . but I guess there might be more to Gabriel's death . . .
ReplyDeleteMight there be ?
DeleteUm, Shawna ? Where is the other chapter ? You can't leave us on a cliffy like that.
ReplyDeleteThe other chapter is very different and it's taking me some time. I want everything to be just right !
DeleteOkay, Dark just "Kicked the dog" no "Draco In Leather Pants" for him.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad ! I never wanted him to be a Draco in Leather Pants. Well, not entirely . . .
DeleteAt first I thought I skipped a chapter. Will we learn more about Rin/Soul's courtship ?
ReplyDeleteMaybe that will be the bigger story SH is always talking about ? Y/Y
DeleteNo, it's not. I was never going to write about the courtship because I wanted to open the story at the wedding.
DeleteThat said, I never thought much about the courtship or how to write it.
I was like "What is going on ?" towards the end of the chapter. I guess the plot does thicken.
ReplyDeleteIt does. I also wrote the plot thickens A/N before Lile named her recent blog post "The Plot Thickens . . ." I promise !
DeleteI think those Angel statues look like different statues depending on the angle the photo is taken from. So creepy.
ReplyDeleteEep! I never heard that. That is creepy, yet kinda cool (:
DeleteThe picture of Soul in the chapter was so how I pictured him. Very wide-eyed and happy.
ReplyDeleteI know, that's what I thought when I saw it on We Heart It ! I believe that's a picture of a member from One Direction though . . .
Deletelove the pretty pics !!!!! it makes up for the dark ending.
ReplyDeleteYay ! I loved finding pics that were usable.
DeleteSo, Rin's family is okay with her marrying Soul ? I guess they can form an alliance.
ReplyDeleteYes, they are okay with it. That is to say her parents are okay with it. They don't see him as a threat.
DeleteAt first I thought she was going to wake up in the Human world, then again Dark seems to know something about the human world.
ReplyDeleteDoes he ?
DeleteOMG poor Rin, I hope Soul can save her ):
ReplyDeleteI'm sure Rin can save herself hopefully !
DeleteThat's the spirit !
DeleteUm, yes where can I get a diamond belt plz.
ReplyDeleteThis is killing me because I had the picture of the wedding dress somewhere and now I can't find it ! That's what happens when serials are months apart. I don't remember anything about the site I found it on either.
DeleteSoul seems nice and sweet, but he maybe to nice and sweet for me.
ReplyDeleteI see that.
DeleteI got a Veritas feel from part 5, I can totes see how this was the first chapter. THE PROLOGUE is back !!!
ReplyDeleteIt wasn't always a prologue. Originally it was the first chapter.
DeleteWhatelse are the Angels hiding from the human angels ? I knew the tea was odd.
ReplyDeleteIDK . . .
DeleteAt first I was made at Rin for running. The she kicked the guy in the crotch and I was like HELL YEAH !!
ReplyDeleteYay !
DeleteOkay, what the hell is happening. I can't wait for the next chapter. I need some answers.
ReplyDeleteMe too !
DeleteFor some reason I really like the name Cassius. It has a nice ring to it.
ReplyDeleteI feel the same way. It just sounds good on the tongue and in your head. I am going to have to resist the urge to use that name in another serial I like it so much.
DeleteNo Soul, trying to bring people back never works !
ReplyDeleteeh?
DeleteNo Soul, trying to bring people back never works !
ReplyDeleteWait, does Soul have wings ? Did I miss that
ReplyDeleteSoul turned his attention to Cassius, who was standing a considerable distance away. His head was down and his wings were folded around his body, like he was praying.
Does Soul have wings ? It hasn't been said.
DeleteThe "His head was down and his wings were folded around his body, like he was praying." is referring to Cassius--I should have made that more clear.
Hello, Mrs. Vance
ReplyDeleteI found your stories on JK's computer screen and I was very fascinated by the photos you've used and all of your stories. They are very interesting even if writing is a low and very lost art.
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OMG, sweetie did you just Complinsult Shawna Harrison
DeleteOh, Shawna please ignore that comment delete it if you can. He knows not of which he speaks.
Um, Thank you ! . . . So, you have a 3D iphone ?
DeleteGurl, I was getting ready for a wedding scene ):
ReplyDeleteI think the same thing to Lile in every one of her serials. I want to see some Lile written fictinal vows !
DeleteI was getting ready for a wedding night scene (Come at me)
ReplyDeleteBad choice of words, girlfriend.
DeleteLilac-- TBH, I hadn't even thought of that . . .
DeleteLilac-- TBH, I hadn't even thought of that . . .
DeleteIs this music thanks to the god that is Pandora ? The Taylor Swift song fit so well.
ReplyDeleteWell, the Taylor Swift song is a result of my HG obsession. Most of the other music is from Pandora. I'm trying to find more string music . . .
DeleteIs the cardigan supposed to cover her wings ? Or is it because she was cold.
ReplyDeleteIt's stylish. I wish I had the picture of it !
DeleteIt's stylish. I wish I had the picture of it !
DeleteI'm theorizing. I think the Gold Coins are important. Seriously Dark is messed up.
ReplyDeleteYes, Dark is in fact . . . Dark
DeleteOh, I see. We think Soul is a bad guy because he is a demon but he's actually the good one.
ReplyDeleteSomething like that.
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