This post got long.....
Baby M
So, I don't blog much about myself, but things have changed ! I will say, I don't see it changing my writing much. Since I am at home full time I find myself writing a lot more and since my mother and MIL and SIL tell me I should let the baby get used to noise, I've been typing away. Because of the work that DH and I do, it's safe to say she'll hear a lot of typing....unless we all start writing on iPads.
Although, interesting fact, DH writes all his first drafts by hand.
I'm between calling the baby either, Baby M or Little Lamb on the blog...I'm calling my husband DH because I think it's fun I get to use it !
Character or Plot ?
Okay, I'm about to be a bit politically incorrect (blame it on the hormones) but I'm a bit of a character-whore. I mean it, I love creating characters. I usually always write character sketches and keep them handy, most of my serials have come to me through characters.
Which is where I am struggling with this new thing (this will be the last mention of it, I promise). I was drafting plot ideas and I was like and then...government shutdown ?
Anyway, based on a comment in the last post, I thought I'd do a role call:
United Light - Plot First
This one was plot first. I wanted to write both an updated version of Guy Maupassant's The Necklace and also write about cults. I knew I was going to have the characters start our clean and innocent and then lose themselves to payback this enormous debt...and ultimately fall in love, but then Elisa came in the picture and that didn't work out.
Rose Garland and Golden Stars - Character (obviously)
I just wanted to write a backstory for Rhett...I had no inclinations for UL2 at this point and I wanted him to have some depth. Then I got swallowed away in Coast Guard Academy life, that I decided to write a whole new thing.
Ivy Brothers - Character
As many of you know Darcy' and Nick's POV were originally flash fictions I wrote for a magazine. So even though they had no real ending, I knew in my mind the minute I wrote him Darcy was going to die. Then I imagined Elias and Slate. As you can tell from the serial itself I had NO idea what to do with these characters...I couldn't write them meeting because that was already established by Nick and Slate''s POV, so I wrote them breaking up.
Veritas - Setting/Character
I have a very vivid memory of how I got this one, it's in two parts. First, I wanted to write about someone with Stockholm Syndrome...blame MSNBC again. I wanted it to be a girl who started to identify with her captors.
Secondly, Lauren was spending the night and listening to one of the Twilight soundtracks and that song " Eyes on Fire" got stuck in my head. It was stuck in my head while I was watching coverage of the 2010 Haiti earthquake aftemath and something about the stories made me imagine a world that was wrecked and how people resurrect from that. This idea of wandering a desolate landscape. Obviously it evolved, but that was the genesis. Not sure how I got on cyberpunk.
Then of course Sara came to me as the "star" followed by the Dorys. I'm not sure when Alan formed.
Hidden - I HAD TO
I have honestly no idea. I think I wanted to recycle ideas I originally had for Veritas. I liked my characters but I had NO plot for them. Plus I had to deal with Minnow's death...and I wanted to bring her back.
Sundays - Character
With Sundays, there is two hands to this. On one hand, I wanted to write a somewhat "sexually charged" but not explicit romance between an officer and a prisoner because I figure with so much testoserone in one place there has to be some UST. Also,I may have been reading a lot of Supernatural fanfiction....and they made it seem so normal.
But also, I wanted to write Haley as a character who is a foil to Alan. He gets taken to prison for something he didn't do, he goes through a lot, people are mean to him, but he doesn't turn bitter and awful. He actually makes a better life for himself by enlisting and still holding to his beliefs.
Mimic-Character
I just really wanted to timeskip and write these characters as adults through another person's lens. I was trying to end it in a way I could live with.
Blessed Hearts- Story
At this point, I knew I struggled with story, so I wanted to write something based on an already told story as sort of an exercise. I had an idea for Rin and Dark and for the setting of where they lived, but the execution of taking an anecdote and stretching it proved to be difficult. This is one I have NO recollection of writing.
On Higher Ground - Character/Story
I didn't want to do this one, but fine. I just wanted to dig into that kmart realism, but also I wanted to write something about Hurricane Katrina...I just never quite got that far.
Actually the starting point for this serial is a scene I never wrote. I saw a scene where Julianna, Rhett, Zane Brooks (who is mentioned in chapter 1 but never seen) and Cody are at a community pool by themselves during Memorial's Day. And Zane (who is in the Marines) bad talks the Coast Guard and they have this lighthearted conversation and then it kind of echoes back later because the Coast Guardsmen who save a lot of people during the Hurricane...guys I watched so many Coast Guard documentaries on YouTube/Hulu/Netflix.
I also wanted this survival story of Julianna, her SIL, MIL and Grandmother trying to get away from the Hurricane.
I also had this scene between Rhett and his sister, Savannah...guys, I see some novellas coming.
Vice
I'd say this time around it is ALL about the characters and I'm now concentrating more on story goals than acutal plot; What is the goal of each character and how do I get them there and what do they have to give up to get there.
TDOSH !
Well, that post was longer than I intended. Who is ready for some Cortland TDOSH ? Now, incidentally this chapter has a bit of Sawyer too.
Cortland as an orderly, I go all editor and horse metaphors...
First of all honey, where did you find that pretty picture. I can't stop staring. I'm loving the T-DOSH. All you need is script format.
ReplyDeleteIt's from We Heart It ! I made an account when I decided to reboot Veritas and I forgot about it and when I went back it had tons of pics !
DeleteHm, I'll try to stick some script format in.
Wow, I would have never guessed that Sara came first. I'm glad Elisa and Sawyer worked out, even though Julia and Sawyer have a more complex relationship.
ReplyDeleteWell, I think Julia and Sawyer are only more complex because we see so much of their lives. We don't get that with Elisa and Sawyer.
DeleteSH, did you catch the Coast Guard movie with Ashton Kutcher and Bruce Willis #akwardthen #akwardnow for Inspy ?
ReplyDeleteI sure did...in fact, that program Ashton is in is the program Rhett goes to in OHG. Lol, funny hastags, but I bet it's less awkward now.
DeleteAs a long time fan I get such a kick out of knowing you've gone from the single girl writer to a fab Mom and Wife. Congrats to you and DH !
ReplyDeleteAw, thanks !
DeleteI kind of like Cortland, he's just really himself and isn't trying to impress anyone.
ReplyDeleteWell, we didn't get to his douche-y chapters, like where he ignores her to spend time with his ex-girlfriend.
DeleteWow, I see Pat gets his texting Skillz from his dad.
ReplyDeleteAh, that must have been so hard for the writer in SH to write.
DeleteIt was fun !
DeleteWow, I see Pat gets his texting Skillz from his dad.
ReplyDeleteAhh, Shawna watching KP ! My new fave Colboltian over JB
ReplyDeleteIt was probably DH or his daughter. Love it either way.
DeleteSo, Word of God is The Penthouse a cesspit or is Sid talking it up ?
ReplyDeleteMust be a nice place sing Flag Morton was hanging out
DeleteMust be a nice place sing Flag Morton was hanging out
DeleteIt is actually a nice place. It looks nice on the inside.
DeleteIsn't it odd how the Dory's kind of became the starts, even though they were not originally the star.
ReplyDeleteLike Rhett ? I'm so glad he got OHG. It fit his character to a T ! I wish we knew if he and Juliana get a HEA.
DeleteWell, I may bring OHG back. A very far maybe.
DeleteLOL at the Ol' Sport line. I bet that's how Julie sees him.
ReplyDeleteWell, I don't think she has caught on that he is rich just yet. He isn't like Patrick or Brad, so she doesn't see how he could have the money he has.
DeleteNow, I can't unsee the past tense thing !
ReplyDeleteSorry ): But, it does work in some places.
DeleteI loved Uncle Jean in Mimic. Are we ever going to learn more about him ? did you ever consider writing about the characters childhood ?
ReplyDeleteBetter questions, has Jean seen the film versions of Twilight ?
DeleteTo be honest, I have never had the inclincation to write Jean and Minnie's childhood. It never crossed my mind. But, I won't talk about them too much because I may change things with Vice.
DeleteBut, in my head...no he hasn't seen the films.
"I felt like I had been missing for a long time and now I was back." - Best line. SH got meta before it was cool.
ReplyDeleteWait, so Juliana didn't get The Herp from doing it with Brad ?
Now that I think on it, she either got it from Brad (You can get herpes from oral sex) who got it form someone else or she got it from a stranger.
DeleteCan't help but to notice Sawyer calls Juliana Juliana Miller. Has he ever done this before ?
ReplyDeleteOoh, I never caught this. Well, at this point Miller is her legal name.
DeleteLove the way you described Cortland he seems like he would be hot. You have the best character names !
ReplyDeleteHe is hot...I'm just saying.
DeleteWas Jean meant to be in as much of the story as possible ? Like was he meant to be in Hidden or was he along for the ride.
ReplyDeleteDoes the "I HAD TO" next to Hidden mean you had to write it becaus of how Veritas ended.
DeleteBryce-- Love the name ! No, Jean wasn't meant to be in the story much at all. It wasn't until he and Alan got in a fight that I realized the potential their relationship had.
DeleteSlodger- Pretty much.
ReplyDelete"My parents had lived in Louisiana their whole lives" I thought they moved to LA from CT
Yeah...ignore that...
DeleteWhile reading this everything came back to me about this story. Elisa is so in control
ReplyDeleteShe totally is !
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ReplyDeleteSo, SH are you planning on blackin gout and writing BH2, thanks
Any chance of blacking out to OHG ?
DeleteI had a feeling Hurricane Katrine was going to play a part in OHG, would Rhett have been dispatched back home ?
Oh no, I've started something here. I think I have a plan involving both of these things...just hold on for the (very slow) ride.
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