Sunday, February 15, 2015

Back with a Vengance (mini-GIF post)


***It's a mini-GIF post***
 
Get ready for something about me feeling bad about not posting



You when you came to my blog today

When I realized I was 8 chapters ahead of posting in V2


When I remembered I have mostly no idea where any of this was going

When I think about some of the stuff I will / wanted to put in V2


My response to if I've been thinking about a UL3
 
Because seriously UL3
(I blame that new Ed Sheerhan song..it gives me ideas)

Okay, back to the trenches


So, I'm on chapter 17 or 18 (I got really confused with my numbering since originally each POV was it's own section so like I had Alan1, Alan2 or Harlow1,Harlow2, and Maxwell1, ) so I am going to start posting with a vengeance...I hope. This is strange because I know where I am, but I have no idea where this is going.

Let's Recap:

We have two storyline going on, but let's stick to A storyline:

It's been a year since Alan Gray joined the Cartel, sure he owes Rayne more money than he can ever payback, but he's adjusting. He hasn't had to kill anyone yet,  he's training to be a bodyhacker by the reclusive Blackbird so he can understand his android body  and he's in an on again / off again relationship with Minnow Dory....while also sleeping with Perespohone, a bartender at Luxor who wants to join the Cartel.

But things have also gotten dangerous  being involved with the Cartel. Alan narrowly avoids a machine gun raid at the Luxor and there is a new drug being sold by the Mjollner that is causing people to throw themselves at trains.

Sara Grace had a baby with the Cartel leader Rayne Washington and now that he has an heir he's ended his arranged marriage to Ivy, Sara's former best friend.

But then during the night of the christening, they all get too drunk and the baby is stolen by a group of men in red face masks.

Chapter 10
So, we've had the christening and a wild afterparty where we learn the Cartel was started by Rayne's great-great-great grandfather when he fled Japan. It's nearly 3 am and they are all walking back to Rayne's house where he has promised to make breakfast....

"Suddenly, a pair of red hooded figures rush past me and one of them knocks into Sara’s back, the other takes the second of confusion to yank Zacarias violently from her arms.  Like the trained sharp shooter he is, Griffin pulls the glock off his back in a second and the men pause. 

The hooded men are wearing leather balaclavas to cover their faces. The one  holding the baby stares back at Griffin unmoving.  The bastard  should be dead, but Grif isn’t shooting.

He can’t.

The hooded man has the barrel of a small pistol pressed to the infant’s head.

Griffin hesitates, we all hesitate. I think about how babys are supposed to have soft spots.
.....

“The train, they’re going to go to the train!,” Minnow screams hoarsely  

....
I pry open the train doors in one try and we enter the cool stillness of the train car.

It’s empty.

I bolt to the next car and it’s the same eerie quiet.
We run ahead to the next car and find the same eeire quiet.
“Come out!,” I shout.  I take out my pistol and start shooting just for effect. 
“Stop,” Luce hisses. “They’ll kill him.”
We run through all 21 cars and don’t come in contact with another soul on the train.
...
“Alan, they have to be on that train,” Sara barks.  “ The whole town is being searched and they’re not here.”
“We tore the train apart, Ma.” Luce says. “He’s not on the train.”
“No,” she says. “You keep looking.”


Chapter 10
-1- Take Me To Church by Hozier ( I promise I had this song before it was being played on the radio every 10 seconds.
-2- In The Air Tonight by Phil Collins ( I know this is a weird choice)

36 comments:

  1. SHV ! MY BIG SONG ! YOU STOLE MY SONG YOU--
    *breathes* i mean whatever. . .

    Also your version of the trenches looks a lot like mine.

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    1. And also sorry ! I have a kind of "big" song I hope you don't steal...it's one of those lust-y songs so I'm always afraid you'll use it on a Peraphina chapter.

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  2. I totally need a shower after reading about Dakota's Brothel.

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    1. ALL the brain bleach...you know sometimes I do a little bit of research when I'm writing serials (we can still use that word,serial, right npr ?) but I've never actually looked anything up about a real brothel.

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  3. Lol, love it when SHV is internally screaming. I was internally screaming for Griffin. Isn't he Ivy's cousin ?

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    1. Rayne is one scary dude.

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    2. Yeah . . . and this is him when he is drunk.

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    3. Griffin is Ivy's cousin, that's why she is the only one who looks him in the eye after he does it. It's her way of saying "i see you and what you did"

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  4. It's interesting that in Vice-world that Alan's exposure to killing has been so limited.

    Was that changed on purpose ?

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    1. Well, in Vice1 I was super sketchy about writing a lot of violence because of all the shootings that were happening...I just wasn't feeling it.

      Also, there weren't a whole lot of people to kill off...I think that changes this time around.

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  5. I'm glad we get to see some more of Ivy. I can see how she and Rayne are total opposites.

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    1. Only she dares to stare Rayne down, but she’s not stupid enough to say anything to him when he’s like this.

      I totally feel like putting up with Rayne's temper is something Ivy had to do a lot of.

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  6. For some reason I thought the Phil Colins song was going to be "Can You Feel The Love" The Lion King

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    1. Lol, that would be pretty funny. I really liked the song and when I saw it was Phil Collins I was kind of surprised. I always associate him with Disney.

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  7. I bet Sage is going to show up more, that's why she has a name.

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    1. Not really, I just kind of have this thing for names that are also nouns.

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  8. UL3 mention ! This is not a test. This is not a test. I need more.

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    1. Well, we know it's a three-quel and not a redux or prequel. So that's something . . .

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    2. It's going to be like OHG...similar situation but with a different plot and more conflict.

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  9. New theory. Story A and Story B take place at different times and Alex is the Rektor. . . just saying.

    I bet this is so easy to poke holes in but still . . .

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    1. I'm going to go ahead and discredit this one.

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  10. OMG, Sheeran's Thinking Out Loud ! I can totally see it for Julianna/Rhett. Even though when he says 70 I think he is saying 17.

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    1. Glad to see UL3 on the horizon. Do you think it will be a OHG redux or something new ?

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    2. UL3 will be an OH3 redux....and now I can't unhear the 17 thing.

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  11. Does that mean we have eight more chapters ! or eight including these ?

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    1. I have written out 8 more chapters....where it ends nobody knows.

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  12. I noticed the url title is Compulsin, which seems appropriate. Extra emphasis on the SIN

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    1. Ugh, I know that was an error I noticed at the last minute...like as I was linking up the post so I kept it in. It is kind of interesting looking.

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  13. We are seeing a whole new side of Rayne. I can see what he and Sara have in common.

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    1. I fee so bad for Sara. She really cares about her kids ):

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    2. I feel like Rayne and Sara are very slap, slap kiss.

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    3. I feel like Rayne and Sara are very slap, slap kiss.

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  14. "Not the typical, Mjollner beauty---not yet anyway."

    What is the usual Mjollner beauty look like ? Blonde like the girl in chapter one.

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    1. He just means they tend to look more cosmetically finished and slightly severe like Belle from Vice 1.

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