I am so happy Lile is back to posting, I love her writing style and she always inspires me but, unfourtantely creative block is plaguing me.): I know the stories and plots I want to write I just can't come up with a creative way to write it so, I can't call it writer's block.
That is why Sundays was is so special to me because the story just came out of my fingers without a lot of work and it was addicting and fun. I'm not giving up, I am still set on telling some specific stories I just need to figure out how to keep it interesting and believable.
Part 4
*look out for a special author's note at the end*
Playlist
- 1- The Stranger by Secondhand Serenade
-2- Red Hot Chili Peppers Instrumental
-3- Elephant by Damien Rice
-4- Times by Tenth Avenue North
-5- Decode by Paramore
Hi Honey !
ReplyDeleteYour endings are always so simple and sweet. Great music choices.
Hmm, this does put a different perspective on the relationship between Haley and Sgt. Maxwell.
ReplyDeleteAt first I was upset because you didn't give titles in the post. The new site is so pretty !
ReplyDeleteWhen reading part 3 and 4 I almost thought it was Haley's POV. I was like wait-what ?
ReplyDeleteIs the next part of Veritas called "Mimic" or is it "Mimic Mimic". Stupid comment ikno.
ReplyDeleteIs purple the official color of Shawna Harrison ? UL2 was purple and so was the author's note.
ReplyDeleteHey, where are the LINKS ?!?!? JK
ReplyDeleteThe ending seemed kind of hopeful but it didn't make me like Maxwell to much. I mean he was doing some serious stalker/jealous crap.
Teenage Dream, like the awesome Katy Perry song ? I'm already getting ideas !
ReplyDeleteFor some reason i think tenth avenue north is the best name for a band. Was it intentional not to have Alan speak in this part.
ReplyDeleteI think the ending leaves it open to whether or not Maxwell an Haley die at the end of the war.
ReplyDeleteWe have all gotten used to your updates. I wish there was something I could tell you to help with inspiration.. . heartbreak seemed to help me ):
ReplyDeleteYeah, this means new sections and theories on the forums
ReplyDeleteScrolling though I can't believe all the great music that was in this piece alone. We are all rooting for you !
ReplyDeleteI thought it was interesting the way "The end" and "Death" are not considered the same thing. Unless the end means the end of the war.
ReplyDeleteIf the previous War was called the "Serial Wars" does this current War have a name ?
ReplyDeleteI see, they changed the name of Ft. Liberty for moral reasons. amirite
ReplyDeleteLOVE LOVE LOVE the new website. I can't even remember what the old one looked like. The UL2 pic is so spot on I just love it.
ReplyDeleteMaxwell defintly has issues with all that "mine" business yet he doesn't want to be close to his own family.
ReplyDeletelooks like SH got the future right with appealing the DADT.
ReplyDelete^ Well, he wasn't exactly tellin'
ReplyDeleteFor some reason I feel like there has been alot of Red Hot chili peppers is that just me ? Like I feared I guess we are never going to learn why Harlow committed suicide.
ReplyDeleteI think Harlow's sucide was a set-up. . . like in A Few Good Aen.
ReplyDeleteThe color schemes on the playlist are always so pretty but I really like this one, I think because it is gray
ReplyDeleteDoes Haley make a full recovery from the bleach, I can't imagine how painful it must be.
ReplyDeleteThe picture for Teenage Dream is pretty ! Is that a picture of Katy Perry
ReplyDeleteFinally, one of your endings that didn't leave me wanting more. I felt like it ended in a ominous but still hopeful tone ):
ReplyDelete(Sad face because it's over)
I got caught up in reading Rosegarlands and Golden Stars again, Such a big UL fan.
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ReplyDeleteLinda -I love endings but, they are kind of bittersweet.
October S.- That was kind of the point.
Maylights-- Thanks, I'm still tweaking it.
CranberriVodka-- oops was I slaking on the *** and ____
LOTR_Mom-- Oh, it's just mimic. I was trying to be artsy.
Darcy_Lover-- In Veritas, violet is Minnow's favorite color and it kind of became my favorite color as well.
Ashlyn-- I know, I know no links. You are right about Maxwell and he is starting to realize that.
Lorrie C-- I will blog about this next time. In fact I may blog before I post anything.
Constance-- He does speak in the beginning a little but, any conversations he had with Haley have already been shown and it woud have been repetitive.
NillaLatte-- Lots of obsession with death.
Mansfield Townsed-- Oh, hon I am so sorry. That is so sad. We love you here at Cobalt !
Marcia-- Do not look to far into it.
Carleigh-- Thanks hon !
Petunia-- Yes, I think I will blog about this.
Sundance-- Why yes, it does . . .
Ft. Life-- Exactly. Doesn't it just sound like it ?
Redrose-- I had deleted my old Shawnaharrison website a year ago. It only had ul on it before I moved ul to it's own website.
Trichelle-- Yes, exactly.
CA-girl- It is very interesting you bring this up.
Coraline - ( :
California Blues-- If I truly knew I would have put it in but, that is the true nature of most suicides.
NMC- What does your username stand for ? It's killing me. Interesting idea . . .
Kandi-- Yes, Gray and Violet have become my new favorite colors.
HappyApple Yes, I looked it up.
Appletini- No, it's not.
Tina RO- Thanks,hon. Erik told me to tell you if Shane's last name started with a name your username would be Tina RN. He then asked me what RN stood for. . .
Princess- Thanks hon ! I actually re-read it to because I forgot about it.
NMC, it's my new license plate
ReplyDeleteOh, that is so cute,I should have known ! If you are driving in LA I'll look out for yout
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